Do you like my opening paragraph? Please answer?

Your writing is fairly good and well developed. The story line leaves a lot to be desired. I understand the direction you're taking with story, which is a credit to how clearly you've written just this paragraph. But, I'm not at all interested in your main character. You tell the reader a lot about what she isn't, when you should be telling us what she is (what she looks like, her personality, etc.). She comes across as being very self-centered and jealous. It doesn't grab me and make me want to read any further. But I think that with a little practice, since your writing style has promise, you could develop it a little further. Keep it up, you'll only get better with time. Good luck!